Sunday, 9 January 2011

Silent Passion

Whenever I distance myself from you, 

Realise, I am holding you close to my heart.

At times I talk to you indifferently, 

Still I nurture your thoughts in my heart

Though I’m rude towards you, 

I’m sure I wont do anything to hurt you.

Whenever I turn a deaf ear to you,

My heart is longing to be entrapped in your soul.

Though my gaze perhaps evades your face

My deep passionate eyes always visualise you,

Even if my gestures arrogantly insult you,

I hope your heart may beat with mine.

Many times my callous silence annoys you, 

But do remember my sweetheart,

I’m longing for your whisper in the night, to last a lifetime….


K G Suraj said...

Touching..Melodious and Sharp ...
Like it very much ..
Keep on blasting Santhoshji ....

Babu Ramachandran said...

I share your emotions Sir....

In this enthusiastic world where people expect their comrades to be rollercoster-mates when it comes to dealing with sensitivity and explicit emotions; I have often found myself deserted on account of my deliberate understating of emotions. Emotional under-profiling seems to be a 'sin' in this world which often like to get 'carried away', be it Happiness or Sorrow...! I would like to paraphrase your lines in my mind and cherish them for an inevitable occassion..

Congrats.. Keep giving us more of your gems..!

ഇ.എ.സജിം തട്ടത്തുമല said...


Eee varikal Malayalathilekku mozhimaattaan njaan thankale velluvilikkunnu!Hahaha!

Good lines and i know your poetic gift. Welcome to the world of blogging! Please set the template to write with white background and black letter to comfort reading.

വെളുത്ത പ്രതലത്തിലെ കറുത്ത അക്ഷരത്തിലുള്ള എഴുത്ത് കണ്ണിന് കൂടുതൽ വായനാസുഖം നൽകുമെന്ന് അഭിപ്രായമുണ്ട്.

shynimol. said...

hallo sir, keep writing you have an artistic way of writing go ahead all the best.

S said...

Very expressive one. All that anyone would want to say u have put it across in the most simple and meaningful way . u have a very an excellent flair for post more..